giovi 10 Report post Posted June 23, 2005 Haicau Haicau e o poezie japoneza, cu forma fixa, care are 3 versuri, cu masura de 5-7-5. Sa facem fiecare cate o poezioara, si sa lasam un cuvant cu care sa`si inceapa urmatorul haicau (sau daca nu, incepe cu ultimul cuvant din poezia anterioara) Linistea noptii Ma duce iar la tine: Stea a iubirii ! c.n.: floare (sau iubirii, iubire) pe.sa. sper ca ati inteles ce am vrut sa spun :Pe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
timida 0 Report post Posted June 23, 2005 Iubire, unde esti? Ai plecat? Te feresti ! giovi, daca nu e bine, ma scuzi? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
giovi 10 Report post Posted June 23, 2005 :Pe te scuz :wub:))) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
giovi 10 Report post Posted June 25, 2005 Fereste`ti glasul, De urechea inimii mele zdrobite. pe.sa. vad ca la nime nu`i place jocul asta :Pe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vallentine 1 Report post Posted June 25, 2005 zdrobita e inima de glasul pasului ce calca pe ea (pe.sa. e bine?) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
giovi 10 Report post Posted June 25, 2005 intentia conteaza :De e aproape bine .. :hi: mersi :tease: primul vers trebuie sa aibe 5 silabe, a doilea 7 silabe, si ultimul vers tot 5 silabe. :De Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
giovi 10 Report post Posted June 25, 2005 EA, speranta mea, ce zambete imi vinde pe lungi saruturi... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vallentine 1 Report post Posted June 25, 2005 saruturi dulci dau saruturi nemarginite draga iubite (acum ,e bine?nu prea am inspiratie) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
giovi 10 Report post Posted June 25, 2005 e aproape bine (doar ca al doilea vers are cu o silba mai mult) mersi mult pentru straduita, esti o draguta :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blueone 0 Report post Posted June 25, 2005 Iubite soare, Nu pleca, mai stai o zi sa-apuna luna! :hi: Cam asta am putut la aceasta ora! Oricum interesanta aceasta forma fixa de poezie! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
