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Inimi zdrobite

de talpa destinului

ce crud loveste... (pacat ca asta e exact ceea ce simt acuma...)

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ma gandesc la tine si

ma intreb de ce

inca de ce te mai iubesc

 

(am depasit cu o silaba la ultimul vers...)

schema e de 5-7-5.. si..ideea era sa folosesti ultimul cuvant de la ultimul post...in cazul de fata - "mort"..ma rog..pay more attention next time..

 

iubesc tot ce am;

cand realizezi ca il ai,

iubirea moare..

 

si..acum nu mai e "mort", e.. "moare"..:P

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